Imagery(2)
January 18, 2008
The rustling of the trees against the white fence is heard from a distance. Then the barking of the dog pulls my attention toward it. The young boy yells for someone to come quick. He hears the soothing buzzing of bees and is awe-stricken by the bird’s song. He wants me to see. I see. He wants me to hear. I hear. I hear the wind brsking the grass. And I hear the rocking of a chair on the deck. I hear the beauty.Whistling and cheering, hurray!
A man carrying a golden, reflective medal made of 5 circles.
The long track behind the man.
An uproar of enthrilling voices.
American flags filling the scenary.
Explanation:
These are two seperate prompted journal entries that were supposed to use extensive use of non-visual imagery. I included them both because they demonstrate my ability to use strong imagery. I like them both because of the simple fact that I tend to overlook imagery so much that it does not often appear in my writing in a non-visual manner. Thus, I like the change in my writing aproach and the reassurance that I am able to be very vivid in describing something in order to get a positive reaction by the audience. Therefor, I am able to fully intensify my writing with all components of DIDLS.
